Okay, you're new to this, I can see.
Many many errors in this piece of graphics, I'll run you through a few of them.
- Take more than 5 minutes on a piece, 5 minutes on a pile of shit is time wasted, 25 minutes on a good piece is time used.
- Text is far too predominant in the picture, blend it in a little bit, lose the huge stroke.
- Make the render larger, fill the space more, and make sure your background fits with the style of the piece.
- Remove that ridiculous copyright shit.
- Stick to a colour scheme and style, pointless doing a blue background with a red piece and green text, play with shades rather than blocks. My signature is a prime example of this.
I don't mean to sound harsh, but that's the stone cold truth of it.
Keep trying though, I want to see more from you.